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The anteriores text below is the original versão version with linguistic and
spelling corrections,whichcontinued
the previous ones until I
decided to make a
new narrative for the
comic correções format.. I
called the work in 2003
Missão Of
Star Mission 3: Space Travelers.. Digitalized the manuscripts
and redid the
illustrations according to
those in the
notebook.. I changed the
subtitle to Cologne and today
in the script of HQ I
decided to call planeta brasa. Only the
original illustrations will be used
here.. I used some
to start the story in the magazine, butas I
advanced in the script
I started to
prepare newones, já
since it is unpublished..
The original story begins with a communication between Gen. Kalar and the Captain of a space freighter in the service of the Interstellar League.. In a sentence that initiates the narrative,I contextualize the situation. governo Zark's government had imposed a blockade on the trade routes used by the space alliance.. No ship would cross him. The Captain protests in a dialogue at the beginning of the story.. The idea of blocking is a Star Wars influence. Quase a year before I saw The Phantom Menace,but had not understood it Ameaça right. The action entertainedme. Another influence was Star Trek, hence the design of the uniforms. The shape of the Pandora II spacecraft is Espaço a slight reference to Jupiter II from the 1999 film Lost in Space.. I didn't know the TV show yet. There are no robot characters.. I wanted to avoid, because as it occurred I would reproduce known models. Includes images of manuscripts for comparação comparison and standing notes with evoked memories..
Colony
I
Somewhere far from our galaxy a long, long time ago. After the discovery of the alien colony, Emperor Zork embargoed the trade route to Derlans and an Interstellar League mission attacked.
-Gen. Kalar, you know o the Empire can't snare Interstellar League ships.. "
- Who said that? Gen. Gen asked. "
- The Alliance Council won't like it.. "
- And who needs to know? We do not inform you that we attack Empires1. -The video communication was interrupted ”.- We will not tolerate any stellar mission.
Derlanian
surface
After colônias the guerra war the Derlanian cities developed and the proclaimed Republic came to control all interplanetary colonies and adopted an economy based on capitalism. Trade has guaranteed them presence on several planets.
A transport with Ender Shin and Thirty flies over the city..
-"Giamm. "
-"It's been a long time since You've visited this planet. "
-"After the war I never came back. When the war was over and the force field shut down, I was ordered to begin exploration of the galaxy's planets. It was surprising. The project had been under development for twenty years, but only made possible by a Quandian ships."
-"The city has changed! "
-"Yes, but this was only
possible because of the new policy adopted by the government. "
-"What about traffic? "
-"Today is less intense
than the other days. We've got a problem with that! "
The transport began the approach with the building of The League2 auxiliado by autopilot .
An
attaché from Admiral Hans recebeureceivedthem and ledthemto
the boardroom..
-
"CaptainCapitão Ender W Shin how nice tosee you! "
- "It's been a long time since não we've seen each other.. "
-
"In our time the light barrier took a long time to break. "
-
"Buttoday
that changed. Commander, eu I'm sorry about what happened months ago.. We'll punish Zork3 for that.. Anyway, Icalledthem for another matter.. "
Exército Admiral Hans led the two men
dois to the
meeting room, where the
Army General and the President of
the Public Rwere present..
-
"Commander
Ender Shin this is Órin Gárin, President of the Stellar Republic and the General of the Army Chôni Tachinc. "
- It's a pleasure tomeetyou. - Answered Ender Shin. "
- Commanderknow that the General was ambassador to Quand 4 for twenty vinte years.. "
- "Very well. The reason we're here today is Há this: seguinte Two days ago Gen. Kalar at the behest of Zork has
closed all trade routes and is attacking the naves that break the barriers.. " - Said the President.
-
"Information reveals that two freighters were attacked and a Mission league suffered sofreu serious damage. "- Continued the General.
- "Zork will not stop until he gets what hewants: the unification of the entire galaxy. Therefore, isso we are sending you on a mission of exploration and attempt to contact the Endorians5, a developing people on the other side of the galactic exploration.. "
-But Endoria is a planet of barbarians who are fighting over possession of land and formando forming their kingdoms, which will become countries later." - Said Ender Shin.
- "What's up? Do you accept the mission?? "
-
Whatd oes Endoria have to do with Zork?? "
- The barbarian Emperor has already contacted them and thinks they are gods.. são He will use all his strength to containthe planet. It's só just part of
Zork's plan.. "
- "I accept the mission.. "
- "So after that meeting she starts.. "
Derlanian
orbit
The Empires ship6 was not
available, isso so the alliance decided to use
a medium-sized acrossing
atravessia ship. A Pandora II, a
powership pulled it from the
station to the distance it could
use its own engines..
-"Control. " - Called Ender Shin.
-"Here's
the control. Pandora II has permission to depart. Have a nice trip!"!”
- "Thankyou, control! "
-" Ignition at
10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1. - I was counting the on-board computer.
"
- "Gibrrrrrrr! "
- "Engage thrusters.. "
- "Giammmm!! "
- Hyperdrive to the max.. " - Reported the Cmdt. Thirty,
thirty.
-Giamm,
giamm.! "
-"Reaching
speed of light and entering speed of stellar displacement."
The Orion-class crossing ship had been designed by the old Republic with the help of the allies and can carry 65 crew members and plays a speed of 200 points.
Capt. Shin passed the coordinates and the navigation officer marked the course to Endoria.
II
On the other side of the center of the galaxy
Emperor Zork
first left his
capital in Arien
to comatothe star mission.. 7 An
veículo Imperador Eagle
tipo Star auxiliary vehicle took
Emperor Zork from the center
of the galaxy
aboard baseship8,which would depart the Endorium in
order to conquer the partiria barbarians. It was the
most battleship ever
built. He served as a fleet
leader. The shuttle with the a
Emperor slowed down and
made contact with the
control that guided her to
align with one of the hangars..
-
"We're aligning ourselves, hangar two, Platform one."
The Emperor was unaware of the Derlanian mission.
III - Pandora II Ship
-Commander, we've just moved into common space..
-That's right, Mr. Thirty. Is there anything else?? "
-"Oh, yes. "
The hologram
is activated..
-Captain, look at this.. Endoria is the fourth planet
of the Iridiano System and does not have a good support.. Iridian is a system of
double stars and ten planets.. Itis considered
that life can
develop under appropriate conditions from
the quintandsixth planets..
Endoria has an
atmosphere with many
clouds and temperatures
reach 400°C."
-"That...
it's unbelievable!! "
-"Yes, i'm sorry. The stars are classified as giants.. The endocranial atmosphere consistsof carbon carbono dioxide, nittrogen,
hydrogen hidrogênio and oxygen very hot. The System islocatedat the end of the great nebula near the Alcan cloud. "
Thirty interrupted, suddenly::
-"Damnit!! "
- "AnyAlgum problems, Mr. Thirty? "
- "WeTemos have a squad of 30 destroyers coming our way and even mesmo course.. "
- "Do we have a way to go hyperspace?? "
- They'd detect us. We can change our course,but their radar will captain us. The displacement through hyperspace will take us directly to Endoria,, but we can hit one of its moons or a of the asterids of the barrier."
- " Officers, triggerable displacement city. "
- "Giiibrrrrrrr... Brrrrrr... "
Pandora II accelerated to the
speed of light and
opened the displacement portal.. The surveillance and target
radars vigilância of one
of the 9 destroyerscaptained the
moment of transition to hyperspace..
- Their radar has detected our displacement.. " -Reported Thirty. - Theywould find us no matter how.. " - Answered Ender. -
"If we get to Endoria... " - Thought out loud Thity.. - We'll kill Zork!! "- Completed the pilot Mr. Tetra. - "If necessary,but this I leave to a background . "-Answered Ender.
 -
General,one of
our destroyers has detected a mass displacement.. Can you confirm your entityid? A ship? " -
"We do not know what caused this displacement Your Imperial Majority, but, yes, it is likely that it was a
ship perhaps off-route or... " -
The Derlanians?? Do we have ships in hyperspace?? " - We've had some problems and we can't send any ships into hyperspace.. " -
Iknow two freighters and a League ship broke the barrier.. Two freighters and a nothing-of-the-League ship!" - Wecan destroy these ships only with the help of a fighter, Your Majesty. The Zork imperor I did not like the way to conduct operations . The last orders such as to retain the fleet in common space have left His Majesty in a way that has been contradicted.. At that moment, a bridge officer contacted the General communicating that an tipo Orion-like ship had movedouor orbited órbita in Endoria.. He ordered the sending of small ships to intercepther.  Search ships elas
were also launched
from the space shuttles
to find Pandora II, but theyfailed, as when they approached
aproximaram and entered orbit their
shields and engines began
to fail.. The cause
was high temperature and eruptions occurred
frequently, althoughit did
not damage the systems most
of the time. By
radio,one of the pilots
reported:: -
velocidade "Control,wind speed ventos increased. 600
km/s. Our shields can't take it anymore.. Temperatures risingto a 800°C. There's a large volume of gas from the last eruption coming our way.. " -
"Get out
of there right now! A planet like this is harmful to us Scorpio. . " - Ordered the Gen. Mr. Kalar.. The emperor accompanied the mission and commented on something he remembered:: - And by the formas falar way, the Lanian derlanianos10 detected a planet in the Era System that probably has adequate conditions for Scorpio or similar life vida forms.. Rememberthat during our rule in Scorps some rebels escaped in a colony ship.. "11 IV - Colony Endoria Surface Pandora II
had moved through deslocado
hyperspace at the speed
of light to
the surface. The deceleration
maneuver as it manobra left
hyperspace had been
the most difficult..
As it ela
occurred, theenemies tried to trackher down. Upon disembarking,
Thirty commented:: -
These clothes will keep us in a stable temperature. The air will be drained inwards and the temperature and air ar pressure
regulated.. Elas They're twice as bigger as on our planet. Water can only be found ina liquid state underground and
in the form of steam in the atmosphere.. "13 -"Wow! It's funny a planet lit by two
suns. " - Thought Ender. At thatinstant, something approachedfrom behind and tore off his helmet of the pilot. Another crew member noticed.. He shot:  The pressure sua seu
eventually caused his seus
organs to jump out and his head
contracteduntil his blood and
lungs like lungs came out of
his mouth. 14th -"Captain, come here! "-Called
Mr. Tetra. -"Your Divine Majority, the pressure must
have crushed you! " -"I
couldn't save him. She attacked him. " - Tetra pointed to the creature
falling to the ground. -"His
appearance is of an Aryan nomadic warrior or one of the barbarians. The
pressure caused him to become deformed. - You've analyzed Mr. Thirty. "15 -"Let's
get out of here. Start repairs to the ship. Mr. Thirty found a village...
" -"A mile away. " - Said Mr.
Thirty "Let's go over there. " The exploration team discovered a village whose dwellings looklike vaults, some made of metal and plastic and others transparent.. In it, . the habitavam Scorpio escorpianos who escaped Zark during the occupation of Scorpiae. Scorpio have developed an artificial atmosphere since the planeta planet's is harmful.. There is no oxygen in the appropriate proportion to breathing.. Half of the população population depends on air-conditioned environments at 38°C and the other at higher temperatures, allowing us to live in the large deserts. Many have mutated and lost the function of defending their poisonous claws deserts. Many have mutated and lost the function of defending their poisonous claws..   Contact with the Scorpio was
peaceful. Thirty stupephised:-se: -“See, sóa colony colônia with our own living
conditions!"!” Afraid, medoa
Scorpio came out of a
small group of curious: -"Aliens, Derlanians? "18 "-Yes. " - Answered Ender. He made the
peace sign and
continued:: -"We came in peace in the
name of the alliance of the peoples of the Solar System. "19 -"I'm Lazar. Republican head of the colony. Welcome. " -"No one ever believed
you existed. Well... almost anyone. " -"What brings you here? " -"We've come to make contact with the barbarians. " -"They are nomadic
peoples. They travel through the desert, attack towns and villages. They think
killing is good. They've never been able to develop. " -"We had information that they were developing. " -"They must have mixed it up. We're developing. We built spaceships.. We have a spaceport." -"We have discovered that Zork will attack you and we wish to help
you. " -"Yes, I imagined this threat. Come with me. " ordenar Lazar tookthemto the radio room to make contact with Pandora II, order them to take off and fly to the colony.  One of the
search ships had captured
Pandora II. The Emperor Imperador begins
to prepare the
invasion and deceives engana
the enquanto nomads, while in
the colony the population
their defenses.. 20th - "Information, Gen. Mr. Kalar?? " -
"Yes, V. Majority.
Pandora II has gone straight to the planet's surface. Now it's taken off in the direction of our target.. " - "The false information did not help anything Gen. Kalar,kalar! " - "Forgiveme, Your Majority.. " -
"Apologies do not help Kalar! We will attack and prevent those Scorpio from returning to their home aqueles planet.". 21
-
Continue with preparations for the invasion.. " Surface of Endoria  -"Gentlemen, I
know many of you don't know me, but the elders remember that I fought in the
great war against Scorpi in his liberation from the planet Zork. Now we're here
to keep Zork from destroying them. So I ask anyone who knows how to fly flying
vehicles to volunteer. " Ender assembled a
group of 320 pilots,, being 120 of them
volunteers.. - "All right, that's a part of the solar system. We know assim zark's ships haveisolated him as well as the nebula. This is where our nossos stellar cargueiros passed to the embargo of our routes.. Any ship that passes through there is destroyed.. We will divide you into four groups of eighty people and each cada will take care of a part of the space.. You will meet with ships and fighters from various planets.. Vain and good luck.. We'll go with Pandora II to the Horizons ship."  The
Derlanians and Scorpio took off from Endoria foram
and headed towards
a League cruiser. The Horizons
ship got into trouble and
got in the
way. The Fighters F- 104 Eagles
and G-5 Guardians took off from the surface of Endoria and
flew toward inimigos enemies,
dividing itself to four The leaders
of the fighter pilots coordinated:: -
"All right,first group come with me.. " -
"Giammmm!! " -
"Attack discs ataque in sight! " - "Arm your loads to laser. " -
"Armed lasers . " - "HereLá they come.. Triggering space drive. "- Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!! " -
"Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! " -
Eagle one, minus one! "  Near the nebula,the barrier
had been broken. The
third team joined
the allied squadrons
that managed to
break the isolation
barrier.. Zork ordered reinforcements.
The league's next marked target was the baseship. -Giammm.! " -Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!!
" -"They're shooting at us!
- Exclaimed one of the target pilots of the discoid cruiser. " -
de Estão They're using the bow cannons. "
-
"Reverse the polarity of the energy field.. Let's go through the - "Inverted polarity. " - Giamm, giamm.! " - Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!! " - "Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! " With the disc broken,the base ship
becamethe new target.. - Fireat the radar and the tower.. " - "LetDeixa me do it, Commander. " - Tchiamm.! " - "Bumm! " - Giamm, giamm.! " - "I'll vou increase the speed! " - "Dragon one what do you want?? " -
The ship's core can be broken,causing the ship to lose power.. " -
"Are you crazy?!!! " - That's my name!! " - Tchiamm.! " - Tchiamm.! " - "Bumm! " - "Bumm! " - General Kalar, we
have a fighter who has escaped.. It will collide. rá " - " Prepare for impact ! " - "Giammmm!! " - "Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! "- "Aaah!! - "LossPerda of energy. Shields damaged.. " -
Get us outof here!! " - "Yes, my Emperor.. " At the same time, the colony
was taken from
Endoria. The battle continued. The settlers
began returning to
the solar system. End
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