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Star Mission: Colony

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The  anteriores text  below is the original versão  version with linguistic  and   spelling corrections,whichcontinued  the  previous ones  until I  decided to  make  a  new  narrative  for the  comic correções    format..  I  called  the  work in 2003  Missão  Of Star  Mission  3:  Space   Travelers..  Digitalized the  manuscripts  and  redid  the  illustrations  according  to  those  in  the  notebook..  I  changed the  subtitle   to Cologne  and  today  in  the script of HQ  I  decided to call  planeta  brasa. Only  the  original  illustrations  will be used  here..  I used  some  to  start  the story in the magazine,  butas I  advanced  in  the script  I  started  to  prepare  newones,    since  it is  unpublished.. 

The original  story  begins  with  a  communication between Gen. Kalar  and the Captain of a space  freighter  in  the service  of  the  Interstellar League..  In  a  sentence  that  initiates   the narrative,I  contextualize  the  situation.  governo   Zark's government had  imposed    a blockade  on  the  trade  routes used by  the  space  alliance..  No  ship would cross him. The  Captain protests in  a  dialogue  at  the beginning  of  the  story..  The  idea  of  blocking  is  a    Star  Wars influence. Quase a  year  before  I saw The Phantom  Menace,but  had  not  understood it Ameaça  right. The  action  entertainedme. Another  influence  was  Star Trek, hence  the  design  of  the  uniforms. The  shape  of the Pandora II spacecraft is     Espaço a  slight  reference  to  Jupiter  II from  the  1999 film Lost in Space..  I  didn't    know  the TV show  yet. There  are no  robot  characters..  I  wanted to  avoid,  because  as it  occurred I would reproduce  known  models. Includes  images of  manuscripts  for  comparação  comparison  and  standing  notes  with  evoked  memories..


Colony

I


Somewhere far  from  our  galaxy  a    long,    long  time  ago. After  the  discovery  of  the  alien  colony,  Emperor  Zork  embargoed the trade   route  to  Derlans   and  an  Interstellar  League mission attacked.

-Gen. Kalar,  you  know  o  the Empire    can't  snare  Interstellar League  ships.. "

-   Who  said  that? Gen.    Gen asked. "

-   The Alliance  Council won't    like   it.. "

-     And who  needs  to  know? We  do  not inform  you  that we  attack  Empires1. -The video communication was interrupted ”.- We  will  not tolerate  any  stellar  mission. 

Derlanian surface

After colônias     the  guerra  war  the  Derlanian cities developed and  the  proclaimed  Republic  came  to  control  all  interplanetary colonies  and  adopted an  economy    based  on  capitalism. Trade  has  guaranteed them  presence  on  several  planets.

A transport  with Ender Shin and Thirty flies over  the  city..

-"Giamm. "

-"It's been a long time since You've visited this planet. "

-"After the war I never came back. When the war was over and the force field shut down, I was ordered to begin exploration of the galaxy's planets. It was surprising. The project had been under development for twenty years, but only made possible by a Quandian ships." 


-"The city has changed! "

-"Yes, but this was only possible because of the new policy adopted by the government. "

-"What about traffic? "

-"Today is less intense than the other days. We've got a problem with that! "

The transport  began  the approach with  the building  of  The League2  auxiliado  by  autopilot .



An attaché  from Admiral Hans  recebeureceivedthem and  ledthemto  the boardroom.. 

-  "CaptainCapitão  Ender W Shin how  nice  tosee you! "

-  "It's    been a  long time since  não  we've  seen each  other.. "

-  "In  our  time the  light  barrier took  a long time to  break.   "

-   "Buttoday  that  changed.   Commander,  eu  I'm  sorry  about  what  happened  months  ago..  We'll  punish Zork3  for  that..  Anyway,  Icalledthem for  another  matter.. "

Exército  Admiral Hans led the two  men   dois  to  the  meeting room,  where  the    Army General and the President of  the Public Rwere present..

-    "Commander Ender Shin  this  is  Órin  Gárin,  President  of  the  Stellar Republic and the General of the Army  Chôni  Tachinc. "

-  It's  a pleasure  tomeetyou. -  Answered  Ender  Shin. "

-  Commanderknow  that the General was  ambassador  to  Quand  4 for  twenty  vinte  years.. "

-  "Very  well. The  reason we're  here  today is    this:  seguinte Two days  ago  Gen. Kalar  at  the       behest of Zork   has closed all trade routes and  is attacking  the naves that break the    barriers..   "  - Said the  President.

-   "Information  reveals  that  two  freighters  were  attacked  and a Mission  league  suffered  sofreu  serious  damage. "-  Continued  the  General.

-  "Zork  will  not  stop  until  he gets what  hewants: the unification  of  the  entire  galaxy. Therefore,  isso  we  are sending you  on  a mission    of exploration and  attempt  to  contact  the  Endorians5, a  developing  people    on the other  side  of   the  galactic exploration.. "

-But Endoria    is  a  planet  of barbarians  who  are  fighting over possession of land  and  formando  forming  their kingdoms,  which   will become  countries later." - Said Ender Shin. 

               -  "What's up? Do you  accept the mission?? "

                -  Whatd oes  Endoria  have  to  do  with  Zork?? "

-  The barbarian  Emperor  has already  contacted  them  and  thinks  they  are  gods..  são He  will  use  all  his    strength  to containthe   planet. It's    just  part  of  Zork's plan.. "

-  "I  accept  the  mission.. "

-  "So  after  that  meeting  she  starts.. "   

Derlanian orbit


The Empires ship6 was  not  available,  isso  so  the  alliance decided  to  use a medium-sized   acrossing atravessia  ship. A Pandora II, a powership  pulled it from the station  to    the distance it  could  use  its  own  engines..

-"Control. "  -  Called  Ender  Shin.

-"Here's the  control. Pandora II  has permission to  depart. Have a  nice trip!"!”

-  "Thankyou,  control! "

-" Ignition at 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1. - I was counting the on-board computer. "

-  "Gibrrrrrrr! "

-  "Engage  thrusters.. "

-  "Giammmm!! "

-  Hyperdrive to the    max.. "  -  Reported  the  Cmdt. Thirty, thirty.


-Giamm, giamm.! "

-"Reaching speed  of  light and  entering  speed  of stellar displacement."

The Orion-class crossing  ship  had  been designed  by  the    old  Republic  with the help  of  the allies and  can  carry  65 crew members  and  plays  a  speed of 200  points.

Capt. Shin passed the  coordinates    and the  navigation  officer  marked  the   course  to  Endoria.


II

On the other side  of the  center  of the  galaxy




Emperor   Zork    first  left      his  capital  in  Arien  to comatothe star  mission.. 7  An  veículo   Imperador Eagle tipo  Star auxiliary vehicle  took  Emperor Zork from  the  center  of  the  galaxy  aboard    baseship8,which would depart  the Endorium  in  order to conquer  the  partiria barbarians. It  was the  most battleship   ever    built. He served as  a  fleet  leader. The shuttle with the   a Emperor  slowed down  and    made  contact  with the  control that guided her to  align  with one of the  hangars..

- "We're aligning ourselves, hangar two, Platform one."

The Emperor  was  unaware of  the  Derlanian mission.


III - Pandora II Ship


-Commander,  we've    just  moved  into    common  space..

-That's right,  Mr.  Thirty. Is  there  anything  else?? "

-"Oh,  yes. "

The hologram  is  activated..

-Captain, look  at  this..  Endoria  is the fourth  planet of the  Iridiano System  and  does  not have a  good  support..  Iridian  is  a  system  of double stars  and ten planets..  Itis considered that  life    can  develop  under    appropriate conditions  from  the  quintandsixth  planets..  Endoria  has  an  atmosphere  with  many  clouds  and  temperatures  reach  400°C."

-"That... it's  unbelievable!! "

-"Yes, i'm sorry. The  stars  are  classified  as  giants..  The   endocranial  atmosphere    consistsof carbon  carbono dioxide, nittrogen, hydrogen  hidrogênio  and  oxygen very    hot. The System  islocatedat   the  end  of  the great nebula  near   the Alcan  cloud. "

Thirty   interrupted,  suddenly::

-"Damnit!! "

-  "AnyAlgum  problems,  Mr.  Thirty? "

-  "WeTemos  have  a squad  of 30  destroyers  coming  our  way  and  even  mesmo  course.. "

-  "Do  we have  a  way to  go  hyperspace?? "

-   They'd detect us. We can change  our  course,but their radar  will  captain us. The  displacement  through  hyperspace will take  us  directly  to  Endoria,,  but  we  can  hit  one  of  its  moons or    a of the asterids of  the barrier." 

-  " Officers,  triggerable  displacement  city. "

-  "Giiibrrrrrrr... Brrrrrr... "



Pandora II accelerated to  the  speed  of  light and  opened the displacement  portal..

The surveillance and target radars   vigilância  of  one of the 9 destroyerscaptained  the  moment  of   transition to  hyperspace.. 

-  Their radar has detected our    displacement.. "  -Reported  Thirty.

-    Theywould  find  us    no  matter  how.. " -  Answered  Ender.

-  "If  we get  to  Endoria... "  -  Thought out loud  Thity..

-  We'll kill  Zork!!  "-  Completed  the  pilot  Mr.  Tetra.

-    "If    necessary,but  this   I    leave  to  a  background . "-Answered Ender.

Base ship: Main  squadron  maneuvers



-   General,one of  our destroyers has detected a    mass   displacement..  Can  you  confirm your  entityid? A  ship? "

-   "We  do  not know  what caused  this  displacement  Your    Imperial Majority, but, yes, it  is likely   that  it  was  a  ship perhaps off-route  or...   "

-  The  Derlanians??  Do  we have ships in  hyperspace?? "

-  We've  had  some  problems and  we  can't  send  any  ships  into hyperspace..   "

-  Iknow  two  freighters  and  a  League ship  broke the    barrier..

Two freighters and   a  nothing-of-the-League ship!"

-   Wecan  destroy  these ships only  with the help  of  a  fighter, Your  Majesty. 

The Zork imperor I did not  like  the  way  to  conduct  operations . The  last  orders  such  as to  retain the  fleet  in  common    space have  left  His  Majesty in a way that has been contradicted.. 

At that moment,   a  bridge  officer  contacted  the General communicating that an tipo  Orion-like ship  had movedouor orbited  órbita  in  Endoria..  He  ordered  the  sending   of  small ships to intercepther.



Search ships   elas     were  also  launched  from  the space  shuttles    to  find   Pandora II, but theyfailed, as when they  approached  aproximaram and entered    orbit  their  shields and engines  began  to  fail..  The  cause  was  high    temperature and  eruptions occurred  frequently,  althoughit  did  not damage the  systems  most    of  the  time. By  radio,one of  the pilots reported::

-   velocidade "Control,wind  speed  ventos  increased. 600 km/s. Our  shields  can't  take it  anymore..  Temperatures  risingto a  800°C.   There's   a  large volume  of  gas  from the  last  eruption  coming  our  way.. "

-   "Get out of  there  right  now! A  planet like  this  is  harmful  to  us   Scorpio.  . "  -  Ordered  the Gen. Mr. Kalar..

The emperor  accompanied the   mission  and  commented on something he  remembered:: 

-   And by the  formas falar way, the Lanian derlanianos10  detected  a  planet in the Era System that probably  has  adequate  conditions for Scorpio or similar life vida  forms..  Rememberthat during  our  rule  in    Scorps    some  rebels escaped  in  a  colony ship.. "11


IV - Colony

 Endoria Surface

Pandora II had moved  through  deslocado  hyperspace  at the  speed  of  light  to  the  surface. The  deceleration  maneuver  as it manobra    left  hyperspace  had  been  the  most  difficult..  As    it  ela  occurred, theenemies  tried    to trackher down. Upon disembarking, Thirty  commented:: 

-   These clothes  will  keep  us  in  a  stable  temperature. The  air  will  be drained  inwards  and  the temperature  and  air  ar  pressure regulated..  Elas    They're  twice as bigger  as on  our  planet. Water  can  only  be  found  ina liquid state  underground    and  in the form   of  steam in  the  atmosphere.. "13

-"Wow! It's funny a planet lit by two suns. " - Thought

Ender.

At thatinstant,  something approachedfrom  behind  and  tore off  his  helmet of the pilot. Another  crew member  noticed..  He  shot:


The  pressure sua     seu  eventually  caused his  seus  organs  to jump out and his head contracteduntil  his blood  and   lungs like lungs  came out of his  mouth. 14th

-"Captain, come here! "-Called Mr. Tetra.

-"Your Divine Majority, the pressure must have crushed you! "

-"I couldn't save him. She attacked him. " - Tetra pointed to the creature falling to the ground.

-"His appearance is of an Aryan nomadic warrior or one of the barbarians. The pressure caused him to become deformed. - You've analyzed Mr. Thirty. "15

-"Let's get out of here. Start repairs to the ship. Mr. Thirty found a village... "

-"A mile away. " - Said Mr. Thirty

"Let's go over there. "

The exploration  team  discovered    a  village  whose  dwellings  looklike vaults, some  made  of metal and plastic  and    others  transparent..  In it, . the habitavam  Scorpio  escorpianos  who  escaped  Zark  during  the  occupation  of Scorpiae.

Scorpio  have  developed  an  artificial  atmosphere since the  planeta  planet's  is harmful..  There  is  no  oxygen in  the  appropriate  proportion to breathing..  Half  of the  população  population depends  on  air-conditioned  environments at 38°C and the  other  at higher  temperatures, allowing us  to  live in  the  large deserts. Many  have mutated    and  lost  the  function  of  defending   their  poisonous  claws deserts. Many  have mutated    and  lost  the  function  of  defending   their  poisonous  claws.. 


 


Contact with  the Scorpio  was  peaceful. Thirty  stupephised:-se:

-“See,           sóa     colony colônia          with     our  own  living    conditions!"!” Afraid, medoa  Scorpio    came out of  a  small group of curious:

-"Aliens, Derlanians? "18

"-Yes. " - Answered Ender.

He made the  peace   sign  and  continued::

-"We came in peace in the name of the alliance of the peoples of the Solar System. "19

-"I'm Lazar. Republican head of the colony. Welcome. "

-"No one ever believed you existed. Well... almost anyone. "

-"What brings you here? "

-"We've come to make contact with the barbarians. "

-"They are nomadic peoples. They travel through the desert, attack towns and villages. They think killing is good. They've never been able to develop. "

-"We had information that they were developing. "

-"They must have mixed it up. We're developing.

We built spaceships..  We  have a spaceport."

-"We have discovered that Zork will attack you and we wish to help you. "

-"Yes, I imagined this threat. Come with me. "

ordenar  Lazar tookthemto  the   radio  room  to  make  contact with Pandora II, order them to take  off and fly to  the   colony.



One of the search ships  had  captured  Pandora II. The Emperor  Imperador  begins  to  prepare  the  invasion and  deceives  engana  the  enquanto nomads,  while in  the colony the  population their  defenses.. 20th

-  "Information, Gen. Mr. Kalar?? "

-   "Yes,  V. Majority. Pandora II has gone  straight to  the planet's    surface. Now  it's taken off  in  the  direction  of our  target.. "

-  "The  false  information  did not help  anything  Gen. Kalar,kalar! "

-  "Forgiveme,  Your Majority.. "

-   "Apologies  do  not help  Kalar! We  will  attack  and  prevent  those  Scorpio  from  returning  to  their  home aqueles  planet.". 21

-  Continue with preparations  for  the  invasion.. "

Surface of Endoria


-"Gentlemen, I know many of you don't know me, but the elders remember that I fought in the great war against Scorpi in his liberation from the planet Zork. Now we're here to keep Zork from destroying them. So I ask anyone who knows how to fly flying vehicles to volunteer. "

Ender assembled  a  group of 320  pilots,,

being 120 of them  volunteers..

- "All right, that's a part of the solar system. We know assim   zark's  ships haveisolated  him as  well  as the nebula. This is  where  our  nossos  stellar cargueiros passed to    the embargo of  our  routes..  Any  ship that passes through there is destroyed..    We will divide  you into  four  groups  of  eighty  people  and  each  cada  will  take care of  a  part  of  the  space..  You  will  meet  with ships and  fighters from   various  planets..  Vain  and  good  luck..  We'll  go with Pandora II to the Horizons ship."


The Derlanians   and Scorpio    took off from Endoria   foram  and  headed    towards  a League cruiser. The  Horizons  ship got  into  trouble and  got  in  the  way.  The Fighters F- 104 Eagles and G-5  Guardians  took off from the  surface   of Endoria and  flew  toward inimigos  enemies,  dividing itself to  four groups. The  terceiro      cinturão   proteger   first  group  had  orders   proteger ataque    to  atacar  attack  the   cruisers and imperial  couraçados  battleships,the  second the destroyers, in addition to protecting the attackships, the third breaking thebarrier, which  extended from the asteroid belt to the nebula and the fourth protecting the surface  and  orbit  of  Endoria,  supporting  the  surface teams..

The  leaders  of  the fighter pilots  coordinated::

-  "All  right,first  group  come  with  me.. "

-  "Giammmm!! "

-  "Attack discs  ataque  in  sight! "

-  "Arm  your  loads  to  laser. "

-  "Armed lasers . "

-  "HereLá  they  come..  Triggering  space  drive. "-  Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!! "

-  "Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! "

-  Eagle one,   minus  one! "


Near  the nebula,the  barrier  had  been  broken. The  third  team  joined  the  allied  squadrons  that  managed  to  break  the  isolation   barrier..  Zork ordered reinforcements.   The  league's    next marked target was the baseship.

-Giammm.! "

-Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!! "

-"They're shooting at us! - Exclaimed one of the target pilots of the discoid cruiser. "

-   de Estão  They're  using  the bow  cannons. "

-   "Reverse the   polarity  of the energy  field..  Let's  go  through the their force field." força

-  "Inverted  polarity. "

-  Giamm, giamm.! "

-  Tchiamm.! Tchiamm!! "

-  "Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! "

With the disc broken,the base ship  becamethe new  target..

-  Fireat  the radar and the  tower.. "

-  "LetDeixa  me  do    it,  Commander. "

-  Tchiamm.! "

-  "Bumm! "

-  Giamm, giamm.! "

-  "I'll  vou  increase  the  speed! "

-  "Dragon  one what do you  want?? "

-   The  ship's  core  can   be broken,causing  the ship to  lose  power.. "

-  "Are you  crazy?!!! "

-  That's  my  name!! "

-  Tchiamm.! "

-  Tchiamm.! "

-  "Bumm! "

-  "Bumm! "

-  General  Kalar, we have   a fighter  who has  escaped..  It  will collide. "

-  " Prepare for  impact  ! "

-  "Giammmm!! "

-  "Bumm! Boom, boom,boom! "-  "Aaah!!

-  "LossPerda  of  energy. Shields  damaged.. "

-They're  Derlanians!! "-   Murmured  Kalar..

-  Get us outof  here!! "

-  "Yes, my  Emperor.. "

At the  same time, the  colony  was  taken  from  Endoria. The  battle  continued. The  settlers  began  returning  to  the  solar  system.


End


 

 





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